REVISE+AND+EDIT+THE+PROBLEMATIC+SENTENCES

__**a) To emphasize the positive**__
 It is impossible to repair your printer today. It is not possible to repair your printer today

We wasted a lot of money advertising in this magazine. The advertising in this magazine cost a lot of money

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__b) To eliminate bias. __
A pilot must be trained to cope with any problem he might encounter. An operator must be trained to cope with any problem he might encounter.

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__**c) To make the sentences simpler and more concise.**__
 We are of the conviction that this document is absolutely necessary. We are sure that this document is absolutely necessary

Bringing about the destruction of a dream is tragic. It‘s bad when a dream breaks down

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<span style="font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">__**d) To eliminate unnecessary beginnings.**__
<span style="font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;"> There is a rule that states that we cannot work overtime without permission. <span style="color: #1f497d; font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">We cannot work overtime without permission.

<span style="font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">You will be interested to know that you can now be served at our Web site. <span style="color: #1f497d; font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">You can now be served at our Web site.

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<span style="font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">__**e) To put the sentences in parallel form.**__
<span style="font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;"> Interviews are a matter of acting confident and to stay relaxed. <span style="color: #1f497d; font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">Interviews are a matter of acting confident and staying relaxing

<span style="font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">Ms Smith printed the letter, and next she signed it and left the office. <span style="color: #1f497d; font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">Ms Smith printed, signed the letter and left the office.

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<span style="font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">__**f) To be more courteous and diplomatic.**__
<span style="font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;"> You must correct all the mistakes in this report by tonight. <span style="color: #1f497d; font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">Could you please correct the mistakes on this report by tonight?

<span style="font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">You missed the deadline. <span style="color: #1f497d; font-family: 'Arial Narrow',sans-serif;">The day of deadline has passed